Dark Poetry #4 |
Untitled - You decide??? |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
They say that many opportunties only come once But how would you feel if you later relized its gone? People in my life had a saying they would always say- "Live everyday like its your last, because before you know it, its gone" What will happen when our lives are over? What are people saying over your shoulder? Do you always think people are talking about you? Are there times when you don't know what to do? Theres people who say I love you, do they know what it means? or does it pass them by like nothing they've ever seen? Life is a precious gift however many times it been wasted how can you live your life, if you never tasted it? try not to cry, try your best to win why end your life, when you just begin? Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I hope someone out there can relate to this poem |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Ah I feel like I have gone back in time and read my early work, very good. As for a title, personally I would call it HUMAN NATURE, as it is human nature to waste the life you have... still thats just my dark 2 cents worth. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thanks for the comment!! Starting to like you how old are you by the way? seeker 72? |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Thank you. Please never take my words as a put down if I make a comment for improvement. That is never my intention. As for age... read THAT GUY YOU HATED I was asked the very same question just the other day. ;-) |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Well what is it?? |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WOW YEA REALLY OLD!! Kate |
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