Dark Poetry #4 |
SOMETHING YOU MUST READ AND REPLY!!! -I have to get home to my mommy |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
can you ever have the right friend? Can you ever have the right family? Life isn't perfect whatsoever. My life I know isn't great at all. Life is a precious gift that you only receive once. Theres a poem I made up and I think yo should read it and tell me what you think and if you'd ever been in this situation or not?? or if you know someone who has been? There was a little girl coming home from school, 2 men approach her and asked if she would like to go home with them, she says no I have to get home to my mommy, they say why not? we have milk and cookies were sure that you'd love. She says no thank you I have to get home to my mommy. They then said we have several toys that we bought for you so you can play. She says no thanks I have to get home to my mommy. They then say listen kid you're coming home with us whether you like it or not. Then she says My mommy told me never to talk to strangers and your a stranger. They say no were not your mommy sent us to come get you. The little girl still says I have to get home to my mommy. Later on fliers were on every post looking for a young girl the mother died several decades later when she was 68, she still continued everyday until her death looking for her little girl. The only thing anyone ever heard was " I have to get home to my mommy" There were no clues or traces, but everytime someone walked down that road they would hear " I have to get home to my mommy". |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
My poem I have to get home to my mommy is very tragic, and it does actually happen in real life we just don't know it. Children are being taken everyday, one will be taken, another heart broken. Some families never see their children again will you? |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Not being mean but I will not personally read this until you space it out and use punctuation. Anyone else game... good luck |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thanks for the info im new sorry |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
YEA OLD N BAD i KNOW!! READ MY BETTER NEWER ONES!! OK? Kate |
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