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Angel101¢¾!
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since 2007-10-21
Posts 48
Lost in pain

0 posted 2007-10-23 10:14 PM



I once was a lost little girl,
until i found pain.

It was and is a resting place,
a shelter from being hurt even worse,
a warm blanket made of thorns.

It hurts yet its is comforting and warm.

It is the only thing that lets us live in piece.

Pain is my fortress,
from being hurt by you.

© Copyright 2007 K - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2007-10-25 10:37 AM


To make it simple I love your poem
Verg
Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 52
Colorado
2 posted 2007-10-26 06:45 PM


you spelled piece wrong it's peace other than that it's awesome
Angel101¢¾!
Junior Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 48
Lost in pain
3 posted 2007-10-26 07:35 PM


Thank u ill change it.
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