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Dark Poetry #4

No One Deserves This

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2003-12-05 05:01 PM

I freeze

I choke inside

I feel a rush of heat

To my empty head

I feel the ground spin underneath me

As I hear her blood churning scream

I slowely get up from the ground

I creep into the living room

I see him standing over her

And I feel my stomach lurch

As my lip quivers

He looks up to me

His face is covered

Hiding monstrosity

He drops the knife

He whispers to me

“No-one was meant to be hurt”

Then turns for an exit

I bend down

To the limp excuse for her body

I taste bile in my mouth

And scream

As I see her beautiful face

Distorted and bloody

I couldve been selfish

And think why me

But that wouldn’t be far

Because no-one deserves this

No-one deserves to see their baby sister

Murdered

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-12-06 05:08 PM

Brutal and dark. Kind of like a rose beaten to the bulb.

GIS

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

2 posted 2003-12-22 12:02 PM

i must say soph, you are getting great feedback for all your poems
O DOUBT THEIR AWESOME!!!
Check mine out k? HEHEHEHE
I miss u guys so much btw:'(

xoxLORxox

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2003-12-22 05:16 PM

Very dark, very brooding poem, nicely written.

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