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Love & Death |
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Aj1992 New Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 5England |
Sleep on your blood stained pillows pay mercy to the unharmed widows your choice, your command your transcending your demands No more weaknesses to identify you can glare into the dragons eye your soul tortured out of all freedom what came of this instance the sudden departure of opinion The plan had no imperfection did your mind encounter a defection? simply say the words just didnt arrive just to late to save your life Think of the peole their blood soaked eyes your weaknesses have been identified let your soul lay to rest in your wooden made robe knowing your decision cost them the world But why care for the victims of the fire when you cancer killed your desire did the broken really die that day nobody will ever discover but we all know that decision defeated you one way or another. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Not bad. I don't really like rhyming poetry but this one kept you reading. |
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Angel101¢¾! Junior Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 48Lost in pain |
Hey waz up i liked this poem a lot!!! keep up the good work! |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
I'm really like this a lot. Your profile doesn't state whether you appreciate constructive critiques.  |
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