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SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY
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SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY |
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ROBERTDAVIDSON New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 4 |
SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY by Robert Davidson She stood in a shadowed doorway Awaiting the appointed time of delight Eyes mocking love as Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night. She stood in a shadowed doorway When I shattered the dark with a light Claiming a fierce kiss on The porcelain pallor of a face so white. She stood in a shadowed doorway The touch of her body against mine stuns As our sexes meet Vaster than explosions of burst suns. Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover. The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover. She stood in a shadowed doorway Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives A cool challenge while My lust blew away like dead winter leaves. Copyright 2005 http://www.robertdavidson.blogsource.com |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
I had someone make me feel like this once. makes me sad. but a truth told none the less. Annie i am but a simple poet, you can hurt me, but you can't stop the ink flow |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i found this to be brilliantly written and worded, i love the description of the emotion and the sense of lust and the ending fell right in place, awesome post Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
this is the first great piece i have read here. though i have not been around for a time. but, this feeling, your flow, structure, vocab, a very great representation of your feelings. this is so becuase i felt myself there, your feelings i could relate(though never being with a woman under those circumstances). i could feel the hollow joy you received from her. just an object, a pseudo presentaion of love and desire. indeed, if there was a fav button i would proceed in clicking. thank you.... |
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Angel101¢¾! Junior Member
since 2007-10-21
Posts 48Lost in pain |
I totally love this poem! Where r u from e-mail me sometime! kbfaulkner6@msn.com |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
excellent writing.... so 'real' Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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