SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY

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ROBERTDAVIDSON
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since 2005-11-10

Posts 4

0 posted 2006-01-07 04:49 PM

SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY

by Robert Davidson

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Awaiting the appointed time of delight
Eyes mocking love as
Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
When I shattered the dark with a light
Claiming a fierce kiss on
The porcelain pallor of a face so white.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
The touch of her body against mine stuns
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of burst suns.

Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever
As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover.
The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever
Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives
A cool challenge while
My lust blew away like dead winter leaves.

Copyright 2005
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Annie78
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

1 posted 2006-01-08 01:08 AM

I had someone make me feel like this once. makes me sad. but a truth told none the less.
Annie

i am but a simple poet, you can hurt me, but you can't stop the ink flow

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2006-01-17 01:11 PM

i found this to be brilliantly written and worded, i love the description of the emotion and the sense of lust and the ending fell right in place, awesome post

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

sanozatsho
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since 2006-01-26

Posts 14

3 posted 2006-02-01 12:08 PM

this is the first great piece i have read here. though i have not been around for a time.
but, this feeling, your flow, structure, vocab, a very great representation of your feelings. this is so becuase i felt myself there, your feelings i could relate(though never being with a woman under those circumstances). i could feel the hollow joy you received from her. just an object, a pseudo presentaion of love and desire. indeed, if there was a fav button i would proceed in clicking.
thank you....

Angel101¢¾!
Junior Member

since 2007-10-21

Posts 48
Lost in pain

4 posted 2007-10-27 07:14 PM

I totally love this poem! Where r u from e-mail me sometime! [email protected]

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

5 posted 2007-10-27 11:34 PM

excellent writing.... so 'real'

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

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