Dark Poetry #4 |
Paradox |
moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Paradox Dominant paradigm, these words were the key. That opened the sanctum, and set the Doppleganger free. Then just before dawn, he came really near. Spoke his name in German, for me to hear. I had no idea, or the power I'd invoke. As I rose from sleep, and his name I spoke. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
I liked it. You work it seems is always good. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thank you Seeker72, very kind of you to say so. moon. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I like this poem it seem to flow freely from you. Your writing is really honest. also your poems seem to have real meaning Abbeon The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thanks Abbeon, I welcome your thoughtful remarks. moon. |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Once again your words challenge my vocabulary. Good write my friend, and keep on writing. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Thanks for your words of encouragement Warrior. moon. |
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