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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
Tears… A humble trickle a screaming downfall Oblivious to you as I begin to crawl Your words are venom to my heart Do you wish for us to part? You turn your back to me when I need you I’m starting to think we are through But to you we were never together You used me now this is the final teather I have heaved my last sigh and cried my last tear My hate for you now stronger than my fear Your lies bring more pain than your fists ever did Now I am leaving and oh god let me see him again please forbid My heart cannot take any more of his poisoned lies Now I see through them and there will be no more “good byes” you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
abit jumbled, but i hope the message is clear.... you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I liked this it had a really good flow to it but hey, all your stuff does  Krysti |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
This is a nice poem and I like it a lot  Good work Tears of Sanity~ |
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comoloco7 Junior Member
since 2007-09-21
Posts 31MA |
its raw, but very deep. Its a topic that drives very closely to home. Its always good to hear the emotions in a piece like this. Keep it up. In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
it should only ever take one goodbye...some get through that one and some don't. This one spoke to my experience...enjoyed "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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etard New Member
since 2007-09-28
Posts 3 |
That was great poem. I loved it |
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