»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
Fighting Demons
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
Fighting Demons |
|
|
ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA 
|
I have no reason to feel this way, just the little demon's running wild. Years of trying to catch them, make them dissappear forever. They just won't go away, what do I have to do? Concious mind aware they are not founded, just moments of weakness in my mind. How do you lay them to rest, bury them? Self talks of logic, reassuring ones self out of this fear. Curse the little Demon's........ |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
nice but sometimes they aren't just "little" demons they can be very huge and scary. |
||
|
Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
It was good, yet felt bitty if you know what I mean. I got the basic feel of the poem but at the end wasn't sure where it stood. It felt like you wrote it then threw it away only to do it again... slightly different... if that makes sense. |
||
|
ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Seeker 72, thanks for the comments. This was a poem about insecurities and the knowledge in my mind that they are just that. Years of abuse linger scars and that is what I curse. Growing and learning to cast them aside and move on. Thanks for being honest. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
