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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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Florida USA

0 posted 2007-08-30 09:16 AM


I have no reason to feel this way,
just the little demon's running wild.

Years of trying to catch them,
make them dissappear forever.

They just won't go away,
what do I have to do?

Concious mind aware they are not founded,
just moments of weakness in my mind.

How do you lay them to rest,
bury them?

Self talks of logic,
reassuring ones self out of this fear.

Curse the little Demon's........



© Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved
The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
1 posted 2007-08-30 02:49 PM


nice but sometimes they aren't just "little" demons they can be very huge and scary.
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
2 posted 2007-09-01 12:42 PM


It was good, yet felt bitty if you know what I mean.

I got the basic feel of the poem but at the end wasn't sure where it stood.

It felt like you wrote it then threw it away only to do it again... slightly different... if that makes sense.

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
3 posted 2007-09-04 09:14 AM


Seeker 72, thanks for the comments.  This was a poem about insecurities and the knowledge in my mind that they are just that.  Years of abuse linger scars and that is what I curse.  Growing and learning to cast them aside and move on.  Thanks for being honest.
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