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Lightening |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
Lightning rips through the darkness with his crooked smile A family of rabbits huddles closer in vain Their attempts of comfort are futile Thunder rolls chasing the lightning playfully Closer still the huddle still in vain The silence stalks after these play mates These takers of lives these changers of fates Another blinding flash! Another Deafening crash! Of this game they never tire Lightning strikes a willow tree setting it on fire Once a happy home for birds now their funeral pyre you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
was just trying something different with this one, was giving nature a darker view to its normal grace, hope you enjoy... you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
To imagine lightning as darkness even though it is light… I really liked the poem. It had a lot of meanings and I can imagine a part of what made you think of lightning as darkness… or maybe I misunderstood it to explain my own point of view :P Anyway, you write good poetry ^^' Hope I read more soon  Tears of Sanity |
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