Dark Poetry #4 |
KILL YOUR MOTHER? |
teddymarvelle Junior Member
since 2007-08-26
Posts 47california usa |
The death knell is ringing and the victim is waiting, It won't be too long, though she'll suffer along, Till death rings ding dong. cash is where it's at, but remember the tide is bad, So beware, Be canny and take care, For prevention is better than to dare. A World of Corruption, A World of Destruction, Power stations burning how slowly are we learning? Trees logged, The air bogged, global warming, to me alarming The world dying, a globe that is frying corporations gaining from a world straining Profits made, Concrete laid, The urban spread, Species dead, how do we change the mother's fate? when all we see is "real estate" a mothers love never dies dont' let that become one more of the lies |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Very well put teddy...powerful poem, thanks. |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
o my goodness, it gave me chills and makes me want to go save the earth, it's excellent. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
A strong and powerful subject. your poem is well written. i liked it thanks. Abbeon. |
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