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Mother Hid the Pills Again
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Mother Hid the Pills Again |
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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Mother hid the pills again, Her son wanted to die She is crying, while he's dying In tears she's praying To heal his pain Momma.. hide the pills again, I don't wanna die... But it's hard to live alone As my heart has turned to stone, Please stop praying.. please stop crying I want to say goodbye Mother hid the pills again Her son wanted to die... She's still crying but he's gone Left his mother to live alone... [This message has been edited by andrey (08-25-2007 09:01 AM).] |
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mountainrain New Member
since 2007-08-20
Posts 4 |
Well, that's a very heavy poem, and the biggest thing I can compliment is the flow. It glides you right through the poem, sadly  |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this is really fun of depth I loved it so sad so strong one of my favorites. Krysti |
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