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andrey
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since 2007-04-27
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0 posted 2007-08-24 02:23 PM



Mother hid the pills again,
Her son wanted to die
She is crying, while he's dying
In tears she's praying
To heal his pain

Momma.. hide the pills again,
I don't wanna die...
But it's hard to live alone
As my heart has turned to stone,
Please stop praying.. please stop crying
I want to say goodbye

Mother hid the pills again
Her son wanted to die...
She's still crying but he's gone
Left his mother to live alone...

[This message has been edited by andrey (08-25-2007 09:01 AM).]

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mountainrain
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since 2007-08-20
Posts 4

1 posted 2007-08-24 10:14 PM


Well, that's a very heavy poem, and the biggest thing I can compliment is the flow. It glides you right through the poem, sadly
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2 posted 2007-08-25 08:48 PM


wow this is really fun of depth I loved it so sad so strong one of my favorites.
Krysti

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