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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2007-08-23 05:00 PM


What Else Can Love Do

“One day”
will find me waiting,
with battered heart
and glued together dreams.

What else can love do.

I sit quietly
And watch lovers
walk in the park.
I whisper a prayer.

What else can love do.

Cold winds blow,
the seasons change.
As the clock waves
its hands at me,
I wait.

What else can love do.

Yoin


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Twilight Warrior
Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106
The World That Never Was
1 posted 2007-08-23 10:07 PM


I liked this poem a lot. What else can love do but wait...

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-08-24 10:20 AM


"with battered heart
and glued together dreams."

I liked this, and it's true. Love can only wait for someone...

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2007-08-24 10:52 AM




That's me waving from across the same park..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Yoinn
Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
4 posted 2007-08-30 06:31 AM


....and wait...and wait....sigh

...thanks everyone

Yoin

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