Dark Poetry #4 |
What Else Can Love Do |
Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
What Else Can Love Do “One day” will find me waiting, with battered heart and glued together dreams. What else can love do. I sit quietly And watch lovers walk in the park. I whisper a prayer. What else can love do. Cold winds blow, the seasons change. As the clock waves its hands at me, I wait. What else can love do. Yoin |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
I liked this poem a lot. What else can love do but wait... "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"with battered heart and glued together dreams." I liked this, and it's true. Love can only wait for someone... So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
That's me waving from across the same park.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
....and wait...and wait....sigh ...thanks everyone Yoin |
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