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0 posted 2007-08-21 11:43 PM


In a slim volume found at last
the missing pieces of future and past,
revelations of the titanic voyage
on which I've embarked.
Page by page the living drowned
begin to surface from the wreck.
Grasping at threads, knotted with
similarities and differences,
I swim with the unborn through the black water
and unbreathable air.
Until tomorrow I close the book and walk away
stunned, afraid.


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1 posted 2007-08-22 12:39 PM


Is this about reading a book and feeling like your living it? I really liked this

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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2 posted 2007-08-22 03:56 PM


More like I've lived it before. Thanks for your kind comment, Brittany.

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