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Dark Poetry #4

You watched me

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-07-31 04:21 AM

You watched me bleed, you watched me die
You watched me not even a bat of your eye
You watched me fall, looked down on my from above
You watched me fade; this feeling for you was of love
You watched me wilt, my death was in vain
You watched me cry, these cuts of deep and flaring pain
You watched me cringe, my life now completely gone
You watched me...for far to long

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-31 11:54 AM

Sir_Vampire, you blow me away

I loved this one. Wonderfully written, as usual!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

2 posted 2007-08-04 05:31 PM

You've done it againe!
this is great,and the meaning of it was
very painful.
hope to read more.

kasey191
Junior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 33
Australia

3 posted 2007-08-16 01:59 AM

deffinatly like it.

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