Dark Poetry #4 |
Let you go |
BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I don't know how to say this, I don't know where to start. But i can't hold on anymore, I'm losing a piece of my heart. I wish that i could change it, And make everything better. But there's nothing i can do, To make us last forever. I have to let you go now, To get on with my life. Before i lose my sanity, And i am filled with strife. So good-bye my dear friend, I need you only to know... I love you more than anything, But it's time to let you go. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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flesh mechanic Member
since 2007-07-27
Posts 67puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states) |
great poem,letting go is always difficult, but its something you have to do, with change of season love can die. |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
At first read I saw a image of a small child and her favorite teddybear. Very nice write. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Thanks for the kind words But i don't agree that love dies. I think that you just start loving someone else. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yes, I don't think love ever dies. That sucks but the poem was great I always love what you have to write about. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
I agree with everyone else about how love never dies. It always stays nestled deep inside of you but eventually it's ok. Somtimes it doesn't matter how much you love someone you still need to let go. Greatly done. -Tara |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
this poem is very nice and the flow of it just fitts. hope to red more sarah |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
What a beautiful and heartfelt poem. The flow was amazing. (Hats off to you) ~Should the truth be so buried |
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