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Dark Poetry #4

R.I.P

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-07-12 03:02 AM

you stand over my shallow unmarked grave,
wondering if this is how a coward behaves,
unable to stand the hardships of my life,
Running away causing nothing but strife,
This selfish act of escape cannot amend,
All those people in life I did offend,
This was it; this was the only way,
I could not bare to live another day,
Now that I am buried for now I am dead,
Please don’t grieve with a bowed head,
Wipe away tears and lift your head high,
As you say a final and ill earned good bye

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-12 12:25 PM

Wow! I absolutly loved it!! especially how it began

This is one of my favorites by you!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

ChristopherRobin
Junior Member

since 2007-07-13

Posts 11
UK

2 posted 2007-07-13 06:48 PM

Oh I can possibly see a lot of folk reading this and sensing a feeling that they grasp this or have been there before. It’s truly an intriguing piece, very well collated.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-07-17 07:45 PM

wow the ending was my favorite part Woah!
I liked this a lot

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

4 posted 2007-07-17 11:43 PM

WOW I AGREE ONE OF MY FAVS FROM YOU I LOVE THIS KIND OF POEM BEAUTIFUL REMINDS ME OF ME ALOT I LOVE IT THANKS

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