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am i the only one who can hear the screams
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am i the only one who can hear the screams |
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tearsofpain Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 38 |
I hear yelling and wonder where it comes from It started out as just a sorrowful hum I got off the bed and walked to the door Listening to the screaming as I looked at the floor Through the dining room The crying gets louder and seems so gloom I walked passed the kitchen and on my way to the bathroom The crying gets closer with each step It ceased for a minute as I stopped to catch my breath At the bathroom door I can hear it more Behind the door which I move there is a mirror I step to look and my eyes open in terror I fall to my knees weakened by what I see Because the girl who screams just happens to be me!!!! [This message has been edited by tearsofpain (06-19-2007 01:07 AM).] |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
I fall to my knees weakend by what I see Because the girl who screams just happens to be me. love that part, I liked the flow Hope to read more. sarah |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah what an unexpected ending It was really good the words just drew me in. And the title as well. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I loved the flow, and i LOVED the ending  Very nice poem!! Hope to see more soon.There is only so much blood i can bleed for you, and continue to live. |
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tearsofpain Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 38 |
THANK U FRO READING |
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