Dark Poetry #4 |
My Shadow |
BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
i walk around the corner and see it follow me. i turn around and look to my suprize i see... my shadow holds a fist curled above my head. a knife tucked in its fingers wishing i were dead. i try to run away from the fear i can now feel. but no matter how fast i run he's always on my heals. one day i know he'll get me there's no doubt in my mind. he'll chase me into a corner and give me no room to fight. he'll finish me off for sure and no one will ever know... how could i have possibly died but be killed by my own shadow. Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
nice choice of words love how it ended and I can dif relate to that hope to read more sarah. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I loved the thoughts in this poem. A shodow. great hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Sometimes it does seem like our shadow side is stalking us. Well said. |
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