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Ian L.R. Sanchez
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since 2007-07-05
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0 posted 2007-07-05 10:33 PM


Lately I’ve been feeling something disturbing
It feels uncomfortable and unpleasant.
Waiting for me to do the unexpecting,
It is very patient.

Somehow I feel like something’s following me,
Going everywhere I go.
Preventing me from the way I want me be,
There’s nothing I can’t show.

It sees everything I try to hide,
There isn’t anything it can’t see through.
It can see what’s inside,
There’s nothing I can do.

It sees everything I try to do,
It laughs at my mistakes.
It has a very great view,
To see how I’ll break

Even if I try to run away,
It’s always around somewhere.
I’m too tired I can’t stay awake,
This is like a nightmare.

There’s nothing the stalker can’t see,
But I will always defend.
The stalker will continue to watch me
until, The End.

© Copyright 2007 Ian L.R. Sanchez - All Rights Reserved
blue face
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since 2007-06-03
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1 posted 2007-07-06 06:58 PM


nice write

sarah


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2 posted 2007-07-09 06:22 PM


Well Welcome to Passions. great to see new faces. I liked this poem. hope to read more soon.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
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3 posted 2007-07-15 07:06 PM


"It sees everything I try to hide,
There isn’t anything it can’t see through.
It can see what’s inside,
There’s nothing I can do."

Very nicely put These were my favorite lines! Hope to see more soon!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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