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The Stalker
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The Stalker |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
Lately I’ve been feeling something disturbing It feels uncomfortable and unpleasant. Waiting for me to do the unexpecting, It is very patient. Somehow I feel like something’s following me, Going everywhere I go. Preventing me from the way I want me be, There’s nothing I can’t show. It sees everything I try to hide, There isn’t anything it can’t see through. It can see what’s inside, There’s nothing I can do. It sees everything I try to do, It laughs at my mistakes. It has a very great view, To see how I’ll break Even if I try to run away, It’s always around somewhere. I’m too tired I can’t stay awake, This is like a nightmare. There’s nothing the stalker can’t see, But I will always defend. The stalker will continue to watch me until, The End. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
nice write sarah |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Well Welcome to Passions. great to see new faces. I liked this poem. hope to read more soon. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"It sees everything I try to hide, There isn’t anything it can’t see through. It can see what’s inside, There’s nothing I can do." Very nicely put  These were my favorite lines! Hope to see more soon!!So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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