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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
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Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-07-05 03:21 AM



The sweet sad melody of the undying cry
Pierces through his heart and the night sky
He has the gift of immortality and hates it
He loathes this eternal unwelcomed gift of life
He is now a vampire unmatched beauty pale and fair
His eyes are now pain filled and his sigh is despair
His life is as dark as the night he is forsake Ned to
He wishes he had refused her he should have thought it through
but the vampyress`s call is irresistible to those who hear it
Her lust for blood out weighs the preys will of denial

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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Alaina
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since 2007-06-16
Posts 106

1 posted 2007-07-05 04:01 PM


really great I loved the story you told in this.

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

sullivanthepoet.com
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since 2007-06-28
Posts 154
Devon, England
2 posted 2007-07-06 07:52 AM


Deliciously dark... the taste of this piece will linger on my tongue for days...

"Live free in the world and owe allegiance to no man"

blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

3 posted 2007-07-06 06:40 PM


nice touch of darkness to the poem
sarah


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