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Sick And Tired She Stands Alone
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Sick And Tired She Stands Alone |
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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
The world is like an open door But I can’t reach it anymore I’m standing right in front of it Without the will.. this is my pit I’ve lost my fight… though someone bright Is calling me on the otherside He’s been through this, I know he did Something stopped him, he’s not scared I know he’s coming after me He knows this place, but I can’t see.. He’s just like me, he has the right He’s coming to the otherside My heart is empty, there is no pride Shut your mouth you’ve got no right It’s still dark… on the otherside |
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stormdancer Junior Member
since 2007-05-10
Posts 31state of confustion |
Nice poem. I like the last line. |
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carolinabeen Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69 |
I miss the hurt, I miss it being talked about. Theirs mine or ours, I miss the talk nonetheless. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I loved it. hope to read more soon... hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Awesome poetry... just didn't like the rhyme scheme... "Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..." |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I liked it a lot! especially the ending. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
love this poem! can diff relate to this... hope to read more. sarah |
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