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Angry Eyes |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain 
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There she is with angry eyes and here she goes again with all the lies what noone knows im glad to admit that when shes alone she cries and sits she tightly shuts her eyes, she tears out her hair vowing to herself she will never care she bites down hard on her lips they are red as blood from so many poisened sips she thought if it was easy she should drink it up finally she realized it was a shallow cup she hates herself so much now she will not forgive herself, no way, no how she cannot look at herself in the mirror she knows she has changed, but she will not falter she curses the day that she once again knows joy to her happiness is only there to annoy who is this girl, who carries such strife? what kind of demon has taken her life? It is i... truly me, this is who i am because i let myself feel love, now i am damned here i come with angry eyes this is where i begin telling all the lies.. ~missy afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
this was really great i saw your work in the teen section but i haven't read it yet, i will and tell you what i thought. I really enjoyed this though. I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
Nice poem lked how the flow went. Hope to read more Sarah |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thanks for the replies y'all |
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