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i won't cry for you
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i won't cry for you |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
i won't cry for you when the world falls apart when all i feel i have left are the pieces of my heart. I won't cry for you when the darkness fades away no matter what happens tomorrow there's nothing i can say. I won't cry for you i'll let the pain roll on The sky is overcast tonight But tomorrow will bring the sun. I won't cry for you no matter what you think no tears will fall from my eyes as we dissolve the link. i won't cry for you It's something i can't do this pain i feel is kept inside as is my love for you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brittany~ Welcome to PiP ... such a heart-rendered penning~ Enjoy your stay in this dynamic circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
thank you! |
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tearsofpain Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 38 |
very nice i liked it |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome Brittany Such a stong person in this poem. I can see her vulnerability but her pride seems to be holding her up. It's a good poem and I thank you for sharing with us. Alison |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Thank you very much! |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
beautiful flow, really good work. welcome to PiP! thanks for the comments on my poems! although the ones you've read are like 10billion years old lol.. and i haven't actually written in a long while anyway. peace! as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
well, i enjoyed reading them. make sure you tell me when you do write more! |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Very nice write. Sometimes the tears are far better dry. †The Divine Sinner† Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner† |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
beautiful..very moving. Loved this. It came straight from the heart |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Good stuff, enjoyed reading this. |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
very nice write, i really look foward to reading more of your work  Taking a drag and watching the world through tired eyes |
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xopoetxo Junior Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 14 |
i love it! very very strong |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
After reading this for the third time I want to say that this is a very powerful piece. I have been where I would not shed a tear for someone I loved. I really can relate to this poem and you did an absolutely wonderful job. Please keep writing. |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
wow this is really a great poem. very nice job. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
I love this poem nice job! |
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Broken_Inside New Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 4Texas |
Well I think this poem is wonderful. I don't think there is anything wrong with it and I can relate to it on how I feel. Alliey R. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This poem was so awesome...I love that I can relate to what you are saying... |
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