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Dark Poetry #4

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blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

0 posted 2007-06-19 09:33 PM

Deep hollowness in the air.
The city has vanished out of sight,
Walking blinded by the hollow night.
Wishing I were somewhere else.
The cold air like Knifes on my skin
As it passes me by.
Only to realizeit was my life.

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2007-07-15 03:45 PM

I know the feeling all too well. Perfect description, Blue!

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-07-15 03:57 PM

i really liked it Blue!! and i feel for you

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

3 posted 2007-07-16 02:08 PM

Thnxs you guys.

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

4 posted 2007-08-04 10:01 PM

I really enjoyed this...

...you did a lovely job.

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

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