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jrr
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since 2007-06-17

Posts 2

0 posted 2007-06-17 04:12 AM

I wrote this when I was 17.. found it and thought I would see what people thought of it.

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Spill the words onto the page
bleeding thoughts filled with rage
the things that you will never say
let them go and fade away
mend your wounds and your scars
send your hurt into the stars
you don’t have to keep the pain
write it down to keep sane
simple words that you write
send your soul into flight

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-06-17 10:03 AM

Not knowing your age now, I would like to see more of your writing, what you have learned, where you have gone with it.

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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blue face
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-17 10:38 AM

loved this poem
welcome to passions
hope to read more

sarah

rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2007-06-17 11:28 AM

Enjoyable read.
Full of emotion.

Same here concerning reading what you're writing at your current age.
Love to read more.

Thanks
V

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

4 posted 2007-06-18 06:26 PM

I really liked your poem, and welcome

I hope to read some of your current work soon.

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

tearsofpain
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since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

5 posted 2007-06-18 09:07 PM

i love this one it is very deep thanx

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-06-19 06:08 PM

Really liked this. Hope to read more. Welcome to Passions
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

jrr
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since 2007-06-17

Posts 2

7 posted 2007-06-21 11:18 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome and the complements. I'll write some more soon if I get in the mood. When I write have to feel like it then I do about 5+ poems fast, usually when I am upset lol

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