Dark Poetry #4 |
Reflection |
spiritwithin New Member
since 2007-06-13
Posts 5California |
Charcoal dark clouds approach preparing their relentless outburst unyielding rain will soon replace the solid brown turf beneath these feet Lighted signs offer a recluse to hide away the fear brightened lives inside concealing the tears Yet motivation lost nothing to gain lack any feeling no sense of pain Stationary watching red lights and green no movement forward unable to sing Voice lost its passion can’t make a sound unable to hear craft a ghost town Now drenched with a deluge thoughts soon, will get clear Enter cantina then go through a mirror |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
nice write |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
hey i really liked your poem. nice write, hope to read more soon... Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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