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Dark Poetry #4

I am the one who...

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-06-06 11:34 AM

I am the one who suffered the most
while you just sat and observed.

i am the one who shed all the tears
and now i am very reserved.

i am the one who wanted to stay
and you just pushed me to go.

i am the one who gave all my love
but you didn't want me to know...

i am the one whom you did hated
yet you didn't want to tell me.

i am the one who was conspired against
and now it's that i can see.

i am the one who digs my own grave
and waits to be placed inside.

i am the one who wants to go on
waiting my turn to die.

i am the one whom you killed today
all because of your hate.

now i am the one who'll decide your life
now i'll decide your fate...

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

1 posted 2007-06-07 03:04 PM

Nicely written.
Full of emotion and depth. Can relate

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2007-06-07 07:08 PM

Very very emotional. I cannot relate to that right now, but give me a few days and then I could relate.

carolinabeen
Member

since 2006-12-12

Posts 69

3 posted 2007-06-08 04:43 AM

What if I am the
one you hate

Suppose I am the one
who

changed your fate

chance a dream that
can't be real

stand alone with

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

4 posted 2007-06-14 08:33 AM

From victim to judge a nice turn around. very deep and very well written

Taking a drag and watching the world through tired eyes

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