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darkblues
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0 posted 2007-06-03 04:27 PM


Theory of Prelude to Silence (experimental)
                                            Monolithic
Born                                    Me                                  Dies            
Here                                    Here                                Here              
|_        __          ___          __|_____              ________|________________________|

|<<<<< Prelude to silence (ncs considered)>>>>>>>>>>> |<<<<< Silence >>>>>>>>>>>|

|<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Time >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>|


n=Nature c= Chemical Reactions s=Spirits

Everyday
In its own dynamic way,
Is in essence
A prelude to silence.

Physically bricks and mortar,
They come between us,
I’m here, walls there______
_______and you’re over here.

Metaphysically- bare with me
Bricks and mortar are,
Naturally
Chemically
and spiritually
becoming me and maybe you too.

This is the prelude to silence theory.  
      ______              _______________
I’ve walked through a hole in the wall…
“hello” says he
“cup of tea” says she,
I just stand there
Perplexed, desperately
I am praying
My own little island please.
I am thus pretending to be
The concrete monolith
In ‘Space Odyssey 2001’,
Communicating by vibrating
Frantically.
That is the nature
Of monolithic stasis.
Translates as a
Thunderous post prayer
‘Amen’ ferocious!

Wonder if we are solitary creatures,
Sometimes I think it’s probably just me
Or that prelude to silence is speaking
To me.
When I think really deeply,
I start to realize________________
My prelude to silence is beginning_
To__happen______exponentially_____________________________ _ _ _ _ _ _ __________________


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-06-07 01:11 AM


Really liked this, I thought the beginning came really strong it was good.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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