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lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
va

0 posted 2007-05-26 08:20 PM



I met you wat back when,
I didn't ahve a worry in my life,
I didn't care back then.
My first care in the world,
& I didn't know how to deal with it.
But I knew,
I couldn't take my eyes off you.
Not even for a litle bit.
As years went by and I got older,
I couldn't lie.
Life without you was getting darker & colder,
Now today,
I look back & say,
I'm glad I met you that day in May.
I'm not fourteen,
And I'm with you,
I'm your sweetie,
And your my boo! =D


Becca.

© Copyright 2007 Rebecca L. L. - All Rights Reserved
ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
1 posted 2007-06-06 07:51 PM


Really like this, warm, soft and tender.  Great job.
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