Dark Poetry #4 |
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I Got What It Takes To Survive |
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LynnFromCT Member
since 2008-02-18
Posts 53CT, USA |
I've been used and abused, mistreated and mislead, so many times before, it's wonder I'm not dead. Been thrown downstairs, pushed through the door knocked out a window, flattened on the floor. Been raped and defiled, bled from wounds made, the cuts that bled soundlessly, those scars did fade. Life hasn't been great, but I've never bailed... I've fought to the end, and my life has prevailed. I am a survivor, and I always land on my feet. I don't put up with bullshit found on the street. I'll never give in, never give up, never stay down; I'll keep doing what it takes, to make my life sound. You think you can beat me, you better watch out! I'll fight to the finish, I'll beat you no doubt, cause I am still alive and I got what it takes to make sure I survive without any mistakes. |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
This is a great poem. It has so much meaning and the words are put together so very well. Welcome to PiP and this is an amazing first post. TJ [&] she's a blood broken rose |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Your strength & tenacity scream out in this excellent first post, I look forward to reading more of your work..good job & welcome to Pip... John "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow i know how you feel. But i havent been raped... well yeaah so.... great first post!! i can't wait ot read more of your amazing poems! ~Zach~ |
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