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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2005-02-27 11:34 PM

She drenched herself in tears
Quiet and still, she leaked
Submerging from the surface
She looked deeper
And there,
Glowing,
Her soul.
Renewed
Reformed

*Just a quickee,

and thanks KE for the inspiration*

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-02-28 01:16 AM

WOOOOOOP! that was SO effin amazing!
i just smiled alll the way through as it just got better and better and better and so on so forth. well done lovey!

FAB!

laura

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

2 posted 2005-02-28 07:57 AM

WOW....extremley well written i enjyed this so much, prais to you
C.J

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2005-02-28 10:03 PM

Just as beautiful as you are.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

4 posted 2005-03-08 04:24 PM

Definitely uplifting. :-)
I really like the way it starts out, then gives the reader a sense of hope, even in the darkest times.

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

5 posted 2005-09-16 03:19 AM

beautifully brilliant.
(i haven't been on here in forevveeer)
but i only just saw this one on your list, and i feel honoured i inspired you

I am a wilted black rose. Searching for cracks of sunlight, to nurture me. And to help me grow.

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

6 posted 2008-01-27 10:14 AM

Excellently written. I loved how it was so simple yet full of so much meaning.
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

7 posted 2008-01-31 08:46 AM

That gives be a beautiful picture in my mind, your poem was lovely.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

8 posted 2008-02-02 01:41 PM

short and sweet, powerful in its own way.

Abbeon

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Fareed
Member

since 2008-02-08

Posts 75

9 posted 2008-02-09 12:16 PM

Hmmm...

I've been reading the similar sort quite a lot these days.

LynnFromCT
Member

since 2008-02-18

Posts 53
CT, USA

10 posted 2008-02-18 08:33 PM

yes i agree with everyone - that was beautiful. I am not good with short poems, but this one was brilliant. great write.

it's good because it makes you see the whole picture not just the sadness, but happiness too.

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