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Shake Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40 |
This was actually one of the tracks for my band RoseonaStone,so technacally it's not a poem. However,I think of music as luquid poetry,so I suppose it would be appropriate to post it here. Love Love is beauty,love is freedom. Love's a long cry in the rain. Love is pointless,love is blind. Love is pain. I kept my heart locked up, And gave you the only key. Then you tore it into shreds, And gave it back to me. My heart's been battered,soul shattered. You made me cry,something I didn't want to do. You made me give up all hope! So why can't I stay mad at you? I still love you. Dedicated to Jennifer. Feel free to give feedback. "When the rich wage war,it's the poor that die."-- |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
I loved it. =] Becca. |
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the amazing emo kid New Member
since 2007-05-23
Posts 6South Carolina |
put this to music and it would be an amazing song! I LIKE  |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
one word AMAZING. i acually wanna hear the song now..sounded great on paper bet it'd sound better in words. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I love music and if i could hear this i would be so happy. i really liked your messaage and i get what you mean. this poem/song speaks not only to the mind but to the heart and soul and makes you think. Thankyou for sharing your soul Abbeon |
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Shake Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40 |
Thanks yall,it means alot. ~Roseonastone~ -Lyricist and Bass----- Shake "When the rich wage war,it's the poor that die."-- |
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