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tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

0 posted 2007-05-17 09:41 PM

LOOKING IN THE MIRROR WATCHING MYSELF FADE
I CAN FEEL MY LIFE SCRAPING AGAINST MY SKIN LIKE A DULL BLADE
THE SCREAMS IN MY HEAD THE CRYING AND WISHING I WERE DEAD
SICK OF THE FFING PATHETIC CRIES
CLAWING FOR LIFE AS MY SOUL DIES
A MOMENT OF SILENCE IS NOT IN MY SCRIPT
OH HOW I WANNA WATCH THE SHEETS BLEED AS MY WRIST RIPS
OR MAYBE A ROPE TIED UNDER MY CHIN
EITHER WAY I WILL BE WHAT I DESERVE A CORPSE ROTTING FROM WITHIN
FINALLY I SLEEP SIX FEET DEEP

I HATE MY LIFE …. HAVE A GOOD DAY

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-05-18 01:53 AM

hmmm not sure if this is within the guidelines, seeing as it talks about harming yourself without stating it's wrong... But i really like this. I can relate and know what you are saying and feeling. I don't think i have read anything by you so Welcome to Passions

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

2 posted 2007-05-18 02:44 AM

sorry if this is a bit much when i write i go with my deepest feelings and i let it go.if this offends anyone please let me know i will remove this,i am a very emotional writer.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-05-23 04:40 PM

well, I do like it though. I love the feeling in it.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

the amazing emo kid
New Member

since 2007-05-23

Posts 6
South Carolina

4 posted 2007-05-23 08:49 PM

yeah this is great! This is what poetry is about, emotion from deep inside you spilling in to words on a page..... or in this case a web page! lol. every one has a day like this.

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

5 posted 2007-06-03 04:00 AM

thank u soo much

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

6 posted 2007-06-03 04:29 AM

You have a lot of talent. You take me some place that I don't want to go, that I don't always understand ~ but you show me a place that I think is important to learn about.

Alison

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

7 posted 2007-06-04 08:08 AM

this is a very deep piece, enjoyed reading it.

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

8 posted 2007-06-14 04:08 PM

thank u

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

9 posted 2007-07-13 01:14 PM

this is amazing loved it
sarah

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

10 posted 2007-07-17 11:48 PM

THANK YOU SOO MUCH

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