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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Her pain lies beneath smiles and laughter covered by the mask which she slips on to disguise the agony inside. She gives freely wears her heart on her sleeve yet something more sinister lies beneath the smile that she portrays. There's a poison charging through her reaching boiling point rearing it's ugly head eager to create agony and destruction, darkness, pain. She grasps for some release she knows it's wrong she knows it isn't what she wants but she watches as poison spills out around her and the mask slowly drops tumbling away, leaving just the remains of a broken soul. |
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Shake Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40 |
....(Speechless) Wow,that was truely amazing. I don't know what,but something in there touched me deeply. I really enjoyed this and will add it to my private library. 10/10 ~Shake "When the rich wage war,it's the poor that die."-- |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yes!!! That is freaking awesome. The well which contained my liquid spirit has cracked and run dry and left in its place a cold stone vessel 10.000 voices are only still whispering God bless, -GIS just to be happy... |
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