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alibaster
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In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2007-05-01 02:29 PM



{For my daughter...I miss you.}


My baby bird

had the most beautiful wings.

She stretched them wide

and headed confidently into the sky.

But then, with a single blink of my eye

the winds of life took her flight.

I helplessly watched her try,

struggling and flapping with all of her might.

But the storms raged on

and no matter how far I reach into the sky

I can not bring her back from the chaos beyond.

My baby bird

help me understand these things.

Tell me how

to mend

your broken wings.


†The Divine Sinner†©

May 1,07

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

© Copyright 2007 †The Divine Sinner† - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-05-04 01:04 AM


Ahhh this is so sad... Did you lose your babt too? one of my friends just did, I don't know what to say to her. I thought you expressed your emotions well. my favorite was the last lines..
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

alibaster
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In my own private hell...(PA).
2 posted 2007-05-07 02:47 PM


Thank you for your kindness. I lost her but not like you think. She was put into a lock down for her behavior last Monday. She seems so lost in so many ways and I miss her.

Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner†

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make

lovergurl
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3 posted 2007-05-08 10:56 PM


aww im so sorry!!! =[ this poem is really great though!

Becca.

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