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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Eyes Crystal blue, filled with blood, Emerald green, stinking cesspools, Hazel brown, violent wrath. These dirty casements, These sullied transoms, These disgusting windows, What do they really hide? Pride? Lust? Anger? Hate? Crystal blue, shining love, Emerald green, unblemished kindness, Hazel brown, unsoiled light. What do these windows hide? Pride? Lust? Love? Kindness? Or are they misunderstood… All these questions, Yet they depend on one: Are the windows open? |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
VG you greatly illustrated how much is hidden within your windows to your soul My mind is like lightning |
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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Yay! Thanks! "Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..." |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
this just gives so much testament to the eyes are the windows to the soul very good liked it lots |
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carter07 Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 31 |
love, love, love!! the only thing I would change would maybe be the title |
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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
The thing is that I don't know how I would chnage it? What describes the poem more? "Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..." |
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carter07 Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 31 |
All I could come up with after an hour was "Iridology of the Soul". What do you think? I will keep trying to think but right now my brain is weary. lol |
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Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Hmmm, not bad. That's actually quite good... but I was thinking, maybe eulugy of the soul??? "Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..." |
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