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ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

0 posted 2007-04-29 05:04 PM

Flow

I am a Note,
flowing in harmony.

Creation of a tune,
unique in it's rhythm.

Started by Greatness,
Divine intervention.

Ending, the writer knows;
yet an endless flowing journey.

Each line begins and ends,
with another already being formed.

Like the current of a river,
the flow of a flower in a gentle breeze.

I am a note,
designed to create and flow.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-04-29 06:49 PM

LadyLisa~
My goodness ... this is just almost too lovely to be in Dark ... WELCOME to PiP~

I hope you will find your poetic stay with us to be a pleasurable one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

2 posted 2007-04-30 11:17 AM

I agree with Miss. Tindle. It's not a dark poem. But I really liked it meaning. Existence is such a fleeting dream for some of us.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2007-05-01 08:22 PM

to the Dark Side!! This is beautiful!!!

ELMO

"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today!!"

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-05-23 12:25 PM

welcome ladylisa

I like the flow of your existence
and await more of your work

Curse
New Member

since 2007-05-23

Posts 6

5 posted 2007-05-24 10:08 PM

I love thies types of poems,very refreshing.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2007-05-25 11:41 PM

oh wow! thanks for that. and hello.

happilly waving
Abbeon

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

7 posted 2007-05-28 11:44 AM

Thanks for the comments. I am a little unconventional in that my writings come to me and I simply pick up my pen and write. This one took less than 2 minutes, and when I was done, I liked it, but I can't explain where they come from. It explains a great deal about me. I feel that I have been given this talent to share things from inside with others. I am not saying that I am any good at it, it's just something i've been doing since I was 8 and now i'm 43. I appreciate any feedback, good or bad.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2007-05-30 07:56 AM

ladylisa, welcome to Pip place. I really enjoyed this piece and I can relate to writing since a young age. Enjoy your time here as you get to know us all, and we get to know you.

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