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Dark Poetry #4

Taste of Death

Rottiestyl
Member

since 2007-04-19

Posts 60
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2007-04-26 06:07 AM

Night has never come
So. . . abruptly.
A collision to my senses.

I
Smell my own fear
Hover over. . . past me.

Have I grown deaf
From my fright?

I
See the diminutive
Flicker
Of terror in the
Corner of my eyes.

And
Reach out to grab
Refuge.
But the
Smoothness of
His face steals my
Scream.

He
Thrusts the caustic
Taste of death
Down my silenced
Throat.

Night has never left
So. . .

Abruptly.

This was first published in the 2005 August
Issue of A Darker Vision E-zine. You are asked to give recognition to the publication when reprinting a published piece.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2007-04-27 09:54 PM

I thought this was pretty good.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-02 12:32 PM

Wow I felt this before really got me. loved it...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-02 05:54 PM

I can not believe that you post something here. I do not come here. now I missed the deadline. Otherwise, I would have a long talk with you. whcih is the worst thing to a teen, I guess? be happy. Sun, moon,stars are still shines for you.
Have a wonderful day and be happy. 5-2-2007

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