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sleeping_beauty23 Junior Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 12Ontario, Canada |
you see me. you let your eyes betray you. you have your intentions. you allow your cool gray to pierce my watery blue. so intensely that mine betray me. betray more then what i was trying to conceal. betray my own thoughts, change my emotional state: release and unleash your eyes have this animal power over me. i feel trapped, and angry that you wield it so well. my blood is rushing. all i can feel is silence. all i can feel is your loud stare. all i want is to stand unmoving. all i want is to surrender to you |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Oh wow!!! I really liked this alot! ~Should the truth be so buried |
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sleeping_beauty23 Junior Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 12Ontario, Canada |
thank you!  i think it achieved what i was attempting to pretty well. |
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