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Voices of the Dead
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Voices of the Dead |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Make them stop These voices in my head Make them stop The voices of the dead I hear them sadly weeping Knowing that I’m keeping Silent secrets of those lost Hidden somewhere in the frost Make them stop their silent pleading I can see them dark and bleeding I can hear their voices through the walls I see them in the icy water falls Names that are printed on stone Fear that creeps into my bones Reminds me that I’ve cheated death But I may be breathing my last breath Those I’ve lost to the bitter cold slumber Come back to me on nights full of lighting and thunder Telling me it’s all my fault Pouring on the wound more salt Dear friends that now haunt my dreams In the night I can hear their screams Alone in this frozen castle filled with hate I lay down and acceptmy fate Make them stop These voices in my head Make them stop The voices of the dead |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Names that are printed on stone Fear that creeps into my bones Reminds me that I’ve cheated death But I may be breathing my last breath~ Kira dark has not been the same latley. Glad you're still here though I love your poems because I can so easily relate to them I know exactly how it is. love from hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Dear friends that now haunt my dreams In the night I can hear their screams Alone in this frozen castle filled with hate I lay down and acceptmy fate Now that is a line. "Dear friends" signify that they were once close to you and now they haunt. The burden of being the last of a clan. Or maybe i'm reading too much into this. Anyway good poem. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Hey there hunnie. Yeah I know what you mean, dark isn't the same. (It's no longer dark) Happy that your still about and always love to hear from you. Lots of hugs and hershey bars!!! Love Kira |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thankyou Twilight Warrior. No, your not reading too much into it. You read it the way I wanted it to be read. Lots of Luv Kira |
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L. Ottanio Junior Member
since 2007-04-17
Posts 27Connecticut, USA |
Kira I have been reading your work - this is a fantastic poem... the lines are perfect, the rhyme, the momentum carries you to the end. one typo - and possible idea: My Dearest friends who now haunt my dreams In the night I hear their screams Alone in this frozen castle filled with hate I lay down my head and accept my fate |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
I liked it alot and i can relate in a fashon to what you mean. Like i wake up and i hear the last words of a friend. this is a very good poem i hope you keep wrighting. I love your Poems |
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