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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
You'll never see the bright of day or the ocean's tide You'll never know what it is to love and How it feels inside You'll never get to run and play or See the sun shine down You won't get to feel pain Like falling to the ground You'll never get to laugh out loud You'll never see my smile The sparkle in my eyes that tells you are worth all my while You'll never get to grow up or Have any memories of life You'll never get to experience death or Understand strife I'll never get to touch you or Kiss your little face I'll never get to show you love or feel your sweet embrace I'll never know you I'll never look into your eyes I don't get to say i love you because you already rose to the skies To the baby I lost |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Awe this is so sad. I am sooo sorry for your lost. if you don't mind me asking what happened? I really like this poem the flow worked in well, and it was so full of emotion... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
A very sad poem. I liked it, even though it was of such a harsh loss. |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
A very beautiful poem. My condolences for your loss. |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
had a miscarrage around 4 months into the pregnency, about a year and a half ago. sometimes it still comes to my mind |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe I'm so sorry for your lost, it must have hurt bad, well if you even need to talk just email me  ...hunnie |
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butterflylp Junior Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 11ky,usa |
I have lost a child and I think that your poem was a wonderful way of exprssing the grief that accompanies such an experience. |
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