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I met death in walmart
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I met death in walmart |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
The chance meeting by the fish stall I met death in Walmart, She was by the fresh fish stall. She motioned me to come away, I didnt see him fall. I wanted to stay and see , The man lying on the floor. He looked a lot like me, But she pointed to the door. Her bus was standing at its station, Death quickly rang the bell. With fear I asked my destination, She laughed and answered :Hell! ding ding * arthur( on a double decker bus with a conductress-ringing the bell twice tells the drive to go-there is no getting off ) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting write Mike. I liked the visuals. Do you have Walmart over there? Hugs & Luv, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
amazing Mike, I really liked the prospect of this poem  hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Very cool!!! I liked the visuals as well. Nice! Luv Kira |
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butterflylp Junior Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 11ky,usa |
I was drawn by the title and deeply moved by the imagery. |
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