Dark Poetry #4 |
Co-Dependant |
Grand_Daddy_Tale_Spinner New Member
since 2007-02-23
Posts 6 |
How many more days will seem like today? Justifying ever single statement I've made. Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops. Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose. How easily stenciled and perfectly prim. Are the faces of freinds now seeming grim. This is the same, menotinous swill. Contained in the grains of a straglers will. So be as it may, or maybe it's not. Worth all this fighting that won't stop till we rot. I'm sick of your pretense and full of you lies. Let us just stop this, before one of us dies. Can you not harness, a moment to feel. Instead of your best, shot at a deal. I've nearly jumped from the brink of hate. But pulled myself back, sure that it's fate. Yet, one can only handle so much of this stress. Before they're laid in their coffin, and put down to rest. So if a truce is a truce, and thats what it be. Then pack your stuff and, get away from me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GDTS~ Welcome to this wonderful circle of poetic friends~ We will come to know you through your words~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really like this, more than your other one. it was really good. hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Very good sir. I liked it very much. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Truly enjoyed! ~Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops. Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose.~ (Fav part) Welcome to PIP!!! Lots of luv Kira |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
yah I agree with Kiara, loved, "Walking on eggshells, and jumping through hoops. Just to hop in the gallows, and tighten my noose." I could relate to this poem. Wonderful. But, I tell yah, the noose only gets loosened when your not walking backwards anymore. Back steps are necessary, healing of course, prior to being open to vulnerability again. Wonderful teaching lesson's in this poem. Nice choice of words and insight here. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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