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Dark Poetry #4

Not Real

Amaya
Junior Member

since 2007-01-23

Posts 10
Mississippi

0 posted 2007-02-03 10:43 PM

Sometimes I feel I'm not real
My heart is wounded and can't be healed
I don't understand
Who I am

I'm so cold
I'm so alone
I want to cry
I want to die

I'm standing there in front of you
And what do you do?
You just walk right past me
Like you didn't even see me

There I stand
As I see you walk hand in hand
The tears are tumbling down
Now I'm tumbling down

Into nothing but empty clouds
Where the pain isn't so loud
Look what you've done
My life is gone

Can't you see
What's happening to me
I wish you were near
Because I need you dear

Here with me
Because I feel
As if I'm not real

(A poem I wrote after my ex and I broke up.)

Let me know when I'm finally apart of this group
So I won't be the one looking like a fool

unpredictable_mortal
Junior Member

since 2007-01-27

Posts 10
Malaysia

1 posted 2007-02-04 04:55 AM

Was he your first?

Amaya
Junior Member

since 2007-01-23

Posts 10
Mississippi

2 posted 2007-02-04 12:00 PM

He was my second love. And I loved him a lot. Then he decided, he that he loved my best friend.

Let me know when I'm finally apart of this group
So I won't be the one looking like a fool

Idontmindyouundermyskin
Junior Member

since 2007-01-29

Posts 32

3 posted 2007-02-10 02:15 AM

Love is cruel, but we find out the most about ourselves in situations where we lose who we love. You will love again, and I'm sure it will be stronger.

Just don't lose your friend over him.
Friends should be held high in a society of infidelities

Good write though, very emotion driven.

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