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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
I could simply jump Off this building high I could simply jump And tell this world goodbye It wouldn’t change anything There’s nothing it would take back It wouldn’t change anything I’d be leaving behind a ton of slack There are those who would miss me It would be so easy to die There are those who would miss me My life is one sick lie I’m a coward if I let myself go I’ll let everyone win I’m a coward if I let myself go It would be my greatest sin Is this really what I want? I find myself moving away from the ledge Is this really what I want? I’ll go on living that’s my pledge |
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Idontmindyouundermyskin Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32 |
Simply wow. Keep writing, this helps me a lot. Its always good to overcome those thoughts. Good write though, I love it. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Hi! And welcome to PIP! I hope you like it here! Thanx for commenting! I'll be looking for you're poems!!! Lots of Luv Kira |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
good pladge 'cos we just found the pills to writers block member? hehe JK. I like this I can relate in every part... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
YAY! No more writers block 4 me!!! Happy U liked hunnie. Lots O' lov Kira |
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