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A Thousand |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
A Thousand... A thousand letters have been sent to nowhere, The words of my love have been told to another, A thousand blood drops for writing your name, A thousand tears...but my tears mean nothing... A thousand wounds of your heart cause your pain, A thousand sorrows are preying upon me, The pain is so deep...it will never fade away... Just several days...But they can't be forgotten... A thousand strangers...I'm searching of your face, The world can be seen in your eyes, oh, my stranger, One second...then a thousand hours of pain... A thousand tears in the eyes of an angel... A thousand reflections in the mirror of my soul, I'm lost in the inside, and sanity has left me, A thousand pieces will never be the whole, A thousand hours between now and never... A thousand sorrows I just can't live through, A thousand questions I'm not able to answer, A thousand thoughts, each of them is of you, The shackles of pain will never hold me back from loving you... A thousand words, lying down in lines, A thousand stories about us, not finished, A thousand...It's just one, genuine love, Forgive me for everything...I have forgiven... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
A thousand words, lying down in lines, A thousand stories about us, not finished, A thousand...It's just one, genuine love, Forgive me for everything...I have forgiven...~ Ending was good as was the beginning the middle stanzas though were hmmm I don't know the flow just kinda didn't make me jump out of my seat it was good but not as good as the beginning and end... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and reply! It was thought to be a song, so there may be slight differences between the stanzas. |
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