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0 posted 2007-01-12 04:54 AM


Pants of apprehension
fumed my view
of the road ahead
like thick fog and maze


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1 posted 2007-01-12 09:58 PM


hmmmm very thoughtful i think this could be more lengthy b/c there is so much I can see with this...
hunnie

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2 posted 2007-01-21 05:01 AM


Hi hunnie,

thanks for your advice....

hm, just lost for words.

that's all i can squeezed from my brain for now.

FNG

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