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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2007-01-14 06:50 PM



1 punch,
2 punch,
3 punch,
4.
Now I'm lying on the concrete floor.

How can you live your life, treating me like you do.
But all I see are your fingers curling up to make a fist.
How can you go through all of this?
I've always wanted to say we're through, but knowing I can't because of you.

Yeah I talk to alot of guys.
But that doesn't mean that you can accuse me of cheating.
That's all you see through your filthy eyes.
The problem with you, you don't believe me when I say I'm not cheating. Then it comes to this:

1 punch,
2 punch,
3 punch,
4.
"I know you're trippin' girl, so I'm gonna punch you once more."

Even though I will always stay by your side,
People say "girl you're crazy,why would stay with him if he makes you cry?"
All I have to say,"Because I love him, even though I might die."

He might abuse me and treat me like crap,
but I believe I can change him,
change him from all of that.


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-16 12:06 PM


Just don't get hurt... I loved this poem
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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2 posted 2007-01-17 01:11 AM


Some issues are deeper than they appear. My friend is in her grave because of thoughts of change. The only change was a purple casket and a orange jump suit.
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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3 posted 2007-01-18 04:58 PM


Well here’s the thing, I’m still with the guy. Even though I know that he treated tme bad enough to lose my trust. I figured out the problem with him, he had never told me that he was on so many level with drug usage,. So I figured If he wants to stay with me then he’ll need to get off that crap. So Now we are happily boyfriend and girlfriend. But thanks for your concerns, but everything is ok now.
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