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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-01-14 12:25 PM


Farewell

What was so dear to her
Is now ashes and dust,
She's locked the last open door,
The queen of anger and lust.
She drowns anguish of loss
In drops of cheap alcohol.
The ones she cared of most,
Have given up on her,
Letting her fall.

A thousand letters
Are all with no reply,
Her dreams are shattered,
Just like the night starry sky
Above her Sorrowland.
When morning comes,
She'll be already dead.

Another step to nowhere,
Another cigarette, lit,
Another sigh of despair -
She sees her life as deceit.
Without saying a word,
She quietly opens the gates -
She's leaving here... What for?
But it's the last of all her mistakes.

A thousand letters
Are all with no reply,
Her dreams are shattered,
Just like the night starry sky
Above her Sorrowland.
When morning comes,
She'll be already dead.

The queen of sorrow,
Why did you leave this world?
A stranger loved you,
But only never told...

A thousand letters
Are all with no reply,
His dreams are shattered,
Just like the night starry sky
Above his Sorrowland.
When morning comes,
He'll be already dead.

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-16 12:03 PM


This was really amazing... i loved it the last two lines bang on
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

A Beautiful Disaster
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2 posted 2007-01-16 07:58 AM


Thank you so much!
trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2007-01-17 01:14 AM


Dang..I need to come more oft to the dark forum
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